I found the rhyming in this poem to be rather trivial. Howver, overall the poem really wasn't that bad.

The only thing I would suggest is to be consistent with your spelling. You switch between using 'u' and 'you'. I like to see you spelling it out fully, but I'm not going to judge based on that. The poem would just look nicer if you stuck with one of them.

Just a thought. But nice job. :)