Oh my, beautiful sad penned you potray here, though short but well express emotions......well done!

Stay positive until the phase has past, As it is guaranteed that, forever it will not last, Once through the phase a life may turn around, Then it is time to forge ahead, and use the new knowledge just found, We all must pass through these times of stress, To gain our psychological and spiritual beings and be a success.

best wishes from west... bert ~

That was very well written. I liked the emotion, depth, and flow you set to this piece of work. It created a great image as well. Nice work, truly.

Great poem

Great poem

Ooh, very interesting.. I liked it, it was quite uniquee.. In the last line there should be a comma after eternity.. The descriptions and details you used really added effect. Nice job! 5/5

Beauitful poem! i liked depth n emotion of this poem and also the descriptions and details..Great read!
Keep It Up!

Keep SMiling
-`-*Tormented

Awesomw poem.5/5