Comments : Just one day

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethan

    Beautiful poem, heartfelt, emotional and most of all it was from the heart and showed honesty of emotion, A beautiful piece, I hope you find that missing piece because I know what it's like when someone means the world to you and nothing will make you happy but that one person- it sucks!!
    beth xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by danielle

    This is awsome i can really relate to this i enjoyed readin ur poems talent mwa

    p.s thanx for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Pretty unique way of expressing your feelings, loved it

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    I like how you expressed your emotion in this poem. A few things I'd like to point out:
    "*your* (you're) the only thing i don't have
    *your* (you're) the only thing that is missing
    i don't *under stand* (understand)"
    just some grammar mistakes.

    Overall, all I like it! Good job!