Comments : Walking alone

  • 13 years ago

    by X2892

    Not 2 bad , very good 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    The first two lines of the poem was enough to take me into the poem, very emotional and very greatly written, this poem dont deserve anything less than a 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Great job.... your poem is great and also flow is really great thanks 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    Never thinking that one day you would be gone

    [This line might work better if you replaced "thinking" with "thought".]

    You know; The long walks on the beach through the sand

    [The only thing I can sugest with this line, is to try and minimise the times you write "the"]

    Overall, it was a pretty sad poem. The ending really summed it up, too and brought it all together. Nicely done.

    Natalie``

  • 13 years ago

    by Grumpy

    Third poem today that I read that gives a 5/5. I dont have many poems on here right now being a first timer and all. But would love for you to read mine when i have them up.

  • 13 years ago

    by Grumpy

    I feel like im going insane!!! 5/5