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Not 2 bad , very good 5/5
by Goran Rahim
The first two lines of the poem was enough to take me into the poem, very emotional and very greatly written, this poem dont deserve anything less than a 5/5
by Sweet lig
Great job.... your poem is great and also flow is really great thanks 5/5
Never thinking that one day you would be gone
[This line might work better if you replaced "thinking" with "thought".]
You know; The long walks on the beach through the sand
[The only thing I can sugest with this line, is to try and minimise the times you write "the"]
Overall, it was a pretty sad poem. The ending really summed it up, too and brought it all together. Nicely done.
Third poem today that I read that gives a 5/5. I dont have many poems on here right now being a first timer and all. But would love for you to read mine when i have them up.
I feel like im going insane!!! 5/5