It doesn't suck, poems don't always have to ryhme in order to convey a message. I liked this one very much, the emotion was brilliant. Nice work!

I love this poem

Im liking this poem very much,, and i didnt know the word suck means awesome,, i must have missed that memo,, anywho great work and keep it up,, i would like to she something longer like a song from you,, your pretty promising from what i see

"I'm lying here on the floor
Screaming cause you

^V these lines don't connect to me, it's missing something. i might be wrong :)

I'm lying here on the floor
wondering what I've done"

the poems very well written, i rated this a five. i really enjoyed it
~joey

Great write!!!! I love this one!
5/5
So good!

Great again you are very talented just wow keep going ur an awsome poet