Thats really deep. I'm terribly sorry your uncle died. I hope you are okay. I think this poem is good, it vented your emotions and expressed them well. A lot of poems are written off vented emotion, and you did well, especially on such a hard day. Keep you head up. Good job on the poem. =]

Very good poem, and I know everyone can relate because everyone loses people that are dear to their heart. VGJ

It's beautiful. i love the simpleness in it. and yet, the idea isn't simple, not at all.