It's very sweet... Did you send this to her? Perhaps it would have changed her mind. :-P Anyway, lovely work!

Absolutely beautiful penned you potray here...so breathtaking written....yet flowed with beautfiul emotions!

That reminded me of me and my ex. =ll. IT WAS GOOD. I loved it! Nice work.

Wow... strong poem! well done. i can relate... keep writing!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Xcellent poem, I love it because of a past situation, and I felt some these feeling for not choosing right. XJ

THat is like, one of the worst feelings to feel, seriously I know!!! (its weird no my other account I have a poem written called "unspoken words")....Sometimes you tend to doubt that "everything happens for a reason" but sometimes we just have to accept it and move on..I understand where your coming from though! loved this poem!
Krissey

I really liked this. I can relate to this with my ex boyfriend. but yeah. that is another story! great job!

Awww..This is so sweet and sad. I
could actually feel the emotion that
you put into this poem. I also could
tell that you didn't put all your focus
into rhyming. You have a remarkable
gift for writting and I say welcome to
my fav's..5/5

Love
Letty

.wow. amazing! i know exactly how you feel. it's happened to me so many times before and i hate the feelings it brings. keep up the awesome work!!
100/5
~maggie

Marcus..I've added you to my favorites list..I recognize your name from somewhere btw..I have a feeling we have talked before on the chat maybe/ Not sure though.

'It was so hard to accept just friendship because I wanted more,
These feelings were able to be hidden, but impossible to ignore,'

I really loved this part of the poem its shows your full feelings for her and it is really strong in words. Keep up the amazing writing huni!! xx
Rox

Amazing job!! so sweet....Great job! 5/5