Comments : I was once your sister

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ok ....this is beyond weird...I swear ..it creeps me out sometimes..I just wrote a poem last night about Trene' (we aren't friends anymore) in the same format, with the same tone, pretty much the same concept! Its crazy!

    So basically I know where your feelings about this situation are coming from..Like you I was the one left to cry when all this went down, like you it hurt me when my friendship with her ended, but I'm so over it and as well moved on and like you am much happier...I like the poems that come out of us when we are angry or upset with a situation...the flow just goes and goes and makes me not want to stop reading...i relate 100% to what your saying..I'd say sorry that your friendship ended, but if your much happier than thats all I want :-)...
    No matter what though....all BS and drama aside, you always got a sister in me, like I have one in you :-()!
    Love you Boo!!!
    Bubba Titta, Chelly

  • 14 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, the feeling in this read is
    Deja vu. Three years ago my sister
    Debbie moved in with us and we were
    arguing almost like every day.
    Then last February unexpectedly
    she passed away in her sleep. I miss
    my sister very much wishing I would
    have told her more often that I loved
    her.
    I hope you and your sister work out
    whatever it is and stay in touch with
    each other remembering you two will
    always be family.

    Your work as always is a great read
    like this one is no doubt.
    God bless and thank you for sharing,
    Bogie

  • 14 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh this was so well articulated i was almost in tears..for the great loss you both share. Sometime wwe find it difficult o forgive and forget...but family should never be viewed as the cauase of strife. It is sad that there was something that could comebetween you and your sis.

  • 14 years ago

    by AshLetitia

    You have talent

  • 14 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    You really portrayed how you had grown up and were not so naive anymore. Nice job! Jpoet*

  • 14 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    You really portrayed how you had grown up and were not so naive anymore. Nice job! Jpoet*

  • 14 years ago

    by jello

    I can relate to this so much! yeah my "sister" just kinda slipped away from me...but really this was good. very well written.
    good job

  • 14 years ago

    by xxSilent Tearsxx

    This is a great poem