Comments : I've Always Wanted

  • 17 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Very sweet! amazing poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    Ok, what is with you and making me cry everytime I read your poems? It's so sweet. I love it. Must I say it? Amazing poem, amazing flow, amazing everything! Everything is always amazing. Its spectacular. Love it

    Love Always
    ~Casey J

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Mason

    Dang david..your poetry is so wonderful. pet peeve though:

    THE CONJUNCTION OF "YOU" AND "ARE" IS SPELT "YOU'RE", NOT "YOUR"

    sorry...HUGE pet peeve..

    AMAZING poem though..it made ME cry, too