I absolutely loved it wow you are a fantastic writer hunni it was so meaningfull the rhythm was exellent well done keep it up (ill stick you with my favs :P ) xxx alex xxx

Are you a sad person?

Hey i just wanted to say thank you on the comment of "She's your daughter" and yes it is true..i love this poem you have talent..5/5

chelsea.

Nice work.. good structure and flow.. funny how the ones that are supposed to protect us can cause us the most pain..