Comments : Lunch break

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Short and sweet, beautiful dedication.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I found this so cute and innocent...it reminds me of something I'd write and thats what I loved about this poem! Your a great poet if you make the readers relate or find it in them that they may actually write a poem like that! I loved this is was so beautiful and a true pleasure to read!
    Chelsey