The idea was great the message your trying to put across, yet someone maybe get hard to understand it but when they understand they can saw the greatness of the message and the last words of this poem mean the stanza i like those very much great keep it up

Geneross

Ah lovely write..
Truly love inspires us in many ways.
Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

God Bless!

Nice poem, sad though. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Wow thats pretty good. Keep writing. I definitley felt like i could relate to that. i loved like the meaning behind it and stuff it was good.

Pretty good , keep working at it, i might cut a couple lines and change some,,(no offence) but hey we all have our own opionions right?

Beautiful poem. it flows beautifully...and i uderstand it easily. 5/5 its really good even though its sad. keep it up. =).

Great poem 5/5 just keep on writing all what u feel inside in your heart god bless!

Very emotional, very sad and very powerful. it ripped my heart out. soooo sad. love poems really get to me.

I think the flow suited the story and feeling being conveyed really well. it made it just that little bit more special.

xoxoxoxox

You did well with this. I like the meaning behind it, that made it better overall. It was really sad, i know love can hurt alot. This showed your emotions very well. The only thing i think could be changed is the title, i thought it could be called These Walls, or My Walls; or something similar instead. Just a suggestion. Great write. Keep it up. =]

I like this one too i give u 5/5