Hey I really liked the emotion in this poem. You let your feelings about this friendship out and it was written straight from the heart. The only thing is that you should try to fix your rhyming up. If you don't think you can put rhymes in then don't, you don't have to rhyme every poem you write. Anyways good job.

I agree with mitsukai eimin. Just trying to be helpful. =] I also think that your line:
Dreams and wishing does come true

Could be changed to Dreams and wishes do come true

I think that would sound better. Just an idea. Keep up the good work. =]

Awww thanx guys this is what i like to hear ... i wanna learn how to fix my poems so they sound better :) thanx heaps hehe