This is a really good poem. I could relate, but at the same time I'd rather die than be one of them, or even think of it. (LOL)

I'd like to read more by you. This is good.

~Scarlett

Hi, it's a great poem...
can u learn me some stuff???

5/5 ;):) u were allready in my favs ;):P

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Oh god, now the message that comes through in this poem is something that so many people need to take heed of!

"Foney
Fake
Sterile
Cheep
My world would be"

Isn't that just how the world is turning out... it's so sad.
Great job in showing it in this piece
Brill
5/5
*gem*