Hi Letty,
I just had to read your poems, it is so nice that people like you enjoy my poems and i am aternally grateful, always.
This poem was well written, and i promise that i will comment your poems like i would my own, keep writing. maybe I will add you to my fave's sometime soon.
Love and best wishes, Tara-Kay

I like how you started this one, I think the line is strong.over all the poem is good.
Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

God Bless!

5/5 u do a great job so keep it up!

Very emotional and insightful. i loved it once again. u have great talent. quite sad. very dark. 5/5

I liked this alot.

I really liked your line here

The war is over and I have lost.
The collateral was my life.

that was really good. you and me must think a lot a like because I have poems similar to this, except they are written from the pt of view of someone whatching someone else crash and burn. Good job! I enjoyed it! Jpoet*

I notice that you have a great talent in expressing your self very nice job I like this sad poem most because I love being sad lols and I though your good at any kind of poetry great piece

Keep writting

Geneross

Yes I do