Very sad poem. I hope this isn't meant to be about you in any way at all, if so, and you need someone to talk to, just drop me a pm. :]

I liked the flow and rhyming in this, it was done nicely. Keep it up!! 5/5

Natalie``

It's good, but i think the rythm in one of the stanza's doesn't quite match the rest of the poem. other than that, awesome!

Now this I liked best.
Though sad I hope problems will not get on the way for your hopes and dreams..

God Bless!

Great job one of urbest..very sad and understandable. i liked it alot and the last 2 stanzas were my favorite. the imagery was very good.
thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

Dam all I can say is that ur poem is very excellent 5/5

I liked this alot. It shows pain. And it doesn't even matter whose it is. It just matters that this poem is so excellent. Keep writing..........please. 5/5

Awww such a sad poem =( But very well writen, good job 5/5

Awhe, that's sad. Reminds me of something that happened to my best friend in the ENTIRE World. Anyway hun. I can relate to the feeling, but not being dead, since glady I am alive. I love this poem though.

Another great job by you, another 5/5 from me.

Wow.. this poem was so sad. You had some nice descriptive words in it and it helped to imagine the situation more. You did such an amazing job on this and I absolutely love the title to it. It works very well with the poem. Great job on this! 5/5

This is a very sad peice... wonderfully expressive nd powerful in its convayance. the descriptions are strong and well placed, not overbearing but still strong enough to stand out.
overall a very well written ballanced peice

5/5

Great job! I enjoyed the read. From the tittle of the poem I was expecting something totally different. I usually don't read to many suicide poems, but I must say that this one was great. 5/5

Letty

I really like this 1ne...i think is is my fav. out of the most i read...i will give this a 6/5
=)

Thats a nice poem!!!
very sad too :(
but cutting is never always the answer i used to cut...

That was awesome. The emotions were really deep, and the pain was felt throughout each stanza.
There is a talent inside you, i believe there is more good work to come.
love Tara-Kay

Omg, can definatly relate to this one too clearly =( amazing work, i really love it! shows you how it really is.