Comments : Mirror/window.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    This is kind of weird. Is it possibly about insanity or something like that? Depression? Suicide?

    I love it the way it is, very clever and open, but I wonder what you meant when you wrote this? Please explain!!

    ~Scarlett

  • 17 years ago

    by Jemma

    That was a strange - i wrote a poem last year and it started with the same line - that spooked me. and it was a similar theme. quite odd. Anyhow good poem. like how you change from the window, to the mirror to time. it works well. The last line seems a bit random though. there is no mention of a 'him' amywhere else perhaps a fe more lines giving a wee bit of an explaination for that.

    It is a dangerous thing to ask what goes on in my mind... but you did so i'll answer. when i worte that i was thinking how so many people ask how you are, how you're feeling, enjoying yourself etc but they're not usually prepared to listen. as long as you say 'yeah i'm good, always good' then that's great. soon as you say - oh i'm a bit down they just flick to autopilot. a few nods but they'll have forgotten it by the end of the day. It was about how you can shout and usually people simply do not hear you.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nyx

    The mirror of the life that can be.... right hm u view life from a distance......goood job

  • 17 years ago

    by Jemma

    The person in 'It's not mutual' would be someone who is from my college.He is a very intriguing person but i he has more than one side to him.