Wow, I thought at first that this poem was a short poem, but once I read it, I thought this is great. It takes so much thought and heart to put that one paper and to be able to use it so clamly and good. I really love it and I hope for you to keep writting.
xo-Yvette Gibson

OmG that is so truu if youu fall in love withh the wrongg boii and they end up breaking up with youu cuz they were like in love wit some other girl and youu!!!

I love it becasuse I can relate to it.

So short, but yet so awesome..good job!!

Wow i luv this... its short and simple

but abso adorable

Awwwww :( 5/5

I like tis 1 *thumbz up*

I liked it, short but it gets the point across. I can relate to this. Good job. 5/5 Keep it up

Woah, that is truely amazing. For such a short poem, you summed up such a sad situation, one that i have been in a few times before, i know how it feels. You did an excellent job. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Short and sweet. very nice rhyming pattern and a heartfelt meaning. loved it

shadow dancer

The poem was really good.. but at the end it says 'I fall in love with you' .. it should be 'fell' 5/5!

Ooo. Great message, it really is. I've felt the same way, and I know where you're coming from. I just didn't see why you put [like any other sky
my world is full of rain]. All skies don't rain all the time. I just thought that was a little odd. =P Keep it up. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Hey gr8 poem simple an says soo much. i'm 2 struk wid all dat.

The poem is short, easy to read and very beautiful...though is is true that it would make more sense if it were "my only mistake was, i fell in love with you" or maybe "to fall in love with you"...
anyway, it's really good...

*isabel*

I like it it has great purpose and has great meaning great work