Very Interesting write..
Something different.
Keep up the good Work!
You have a nice way writing, I liked it.
God Bless!

Love it lol

Wow
I really liked this.
It was very unique and different, original in concept and that's what drew me into it.

While a soft snow falls from the dark heavens above,
To cover all in a soft, white blanket of fluff,
All is quite,
((I loved this stanza. Beautiful.))

Very nicely written. I love how you wrote it as a story.. Nicely done. YEt again, I feel it was rushed because of the commas and no pauses. Keep it up.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Short but full of detail... i really liked the flow and the descriptive words.