I like it. short, sweet, and to the point. I think the title could have been different. But hey thats just me. Good job.

The concept of this poem was great. But you started the poem off as speaking of the person then toward the ending you started speaking to the person. I think that you might want to choose one way of writing it either your going to be speaking of him or speaking to him. Other then that mild mistake I say that you have a excellent poem. 4/5

I mean 5/5

Letty

Very nicely written. I love this poem. 5/5 for you. And thanks for your comment. God will keep you both together and I pray that he will love you forever.