I like this alot. The title is good and you used it well to work in with the poem. I can relate alot to this poem. Lies like that, especially being told that they love you, when they really don't, hurts so much. Keep up the great work. =] 5/5

This is really good. I like the title even more so.

Wowee-- You know what? I reckon this poem would work REALLY well as a song. It just had this song feel to it, ya know?

Really good job again, hun. You're a fantastic writer! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Awhh, another very sad poem! I loved the title, very catchy.. But I kind of felt that the rest of the poem was a little bland compared to that.. I just kind of read over the words and didn't register them.. Maybe add in a little more detail to make it more effective.. Nice job though 4/5

This one wasn't as well written as the other one and the flw wa sa bit rocky. Maybe add in some more details to make this poem more concrete.