Today she told me she needed a break she wants to sort out her life.
I feel like i wrote here, i am on the cliff
the only thing that still keeps me here is coz she said she loves me.
but without her im not going to stay here!!

AWESOME!
ur emotions show clearly. u got a gr8 flow. i can see clearly that ur heart was set. love is so sad. keep writing:)

I really liked it. It flowed well. Thanks for the comment! 5/5 Keep it up

I like your flow. and your wording. and...everything else =]
thanks for the comment =]
Lauren

I think your poems are tremendous. This is another great peace with such emotion that you get across so well in words. Great piece. (5/5)

Kelly
xx

Hey, beautiful poem, well done!
Really sad, with loads of emotion shining through.
Awsome Poem, LoveMel

This is so good. i really liked this one. i have read it over and over. perfect. no mistakes. none. just perfect

5. so so excellent.

David