Awww this is so sweet good job u really got ur emotion across 5/5

Amazing! i like how u discribe her. u use words in unqual ways. true lov doesn't see things like other do. i like it:)

"I'm not perfect i can not be,
for her I'll try, I'll try to be"

Beautiful. A fitting tribute to someone who means a lot.
I love your happy poems... Well done!
5/5
*Gem*