I really enjoy your poems, but i have one suggestion. Sometimes it seems your rhymes are a little forced. For instance, they rhyme perfectly but it can come out a little funny like buffered and suffered. It is a great poem, 5/5 but that just sounded a little forced to me. Hope you don't take this personally just to help you grow as a poet cuz I thought it was great! Jpoet*

Great poem! I loved reading it. It really made me smile!

5/5