"they soaring side by side in the sky"

Should be:
"they're soaring side by side in the sky"

"this girl is tattooed in my heart"

I think it would sound better if -
"this girl is tattooed on my heart"
(But that's my opinion)

I like this poem, it is very sweet and obviously shows just how much you really do love this girl you are writing about. It flowed rather well, it lost some of the flow and rhyme near the end, but I didn't thikn it affected it enough for me to give it anything less than a five. This poem was in well deserving of a five. Enjoy. :]

Aww tripp! becky's so lucky to have u!! this is too cute! 5/5!

Nice poem man. I know what thats like i just found the women i love. i can tell that you really mean it.

Becki is one lucky gurl..i prbly just butchered her name whoops..nice job i like it..

love ya lots,
~sore