Wow, i realy like it. =)

favourite lines:

"Defend your honor and defend it true
For no one will live to defend you
As you watch the last man fall
Red devilsh eyes of yours
Instill the fear in them all
Black scales ripple upon your skin
Let you slither from the battle field"

touching, poignant, wonderful for an 11 yr old. =P

keep writing, u have potential,
xxx

Did you write that? if you did, it's cool. if you didn't, SHAME ON YOU.

Why didn't you tell me you could write such poetry?!

Why didn't you tell me you could write such poetry?!