Becca, great job hun! just two spelling errors, "vribrating" and "Strenght"

Otherwise, this poem was a great read and i liked that it didn't rhyme, it didn't have to. It go the meaning across and made perfect sense. I'm sooo sorry about your loss....

Ciao xx

Becca, great job hun! just two spelling errors, "vribrating" and "Strenght"

Otherwise, this poem was a great read and i liked that it didn't rhyme, it didn't have to. It go the meaning across and made perfect sense. I'm sooo sorry about your loss....

Ciao xx

This poem is awesome and I am sorry for the death of your friend... 5/5...check my poems out... I am impressed...