Nice write. I think, personally, that it didn't quite flow as well as it could have, but the ideas and emotions that it evoked were quite nice. :)

4/5

C-U-T-E. that basically sums it all up. xo.

Great poem, very well written,

and welcome back to our club, it is so nice you to have you in
Academy of world wide poets. take care

This deserves a 5/5!!! great poem!!!

Bryan,

I love this poem! it's really quite great! you did an excellent job! I'm amazed at how great of a writer you are