I LIKED UR POEM SO MUCH..IT HAD A VERY DEEP MEANIN INSIDE..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..5/5
SHAYMAA..

I liked it. It souned like it came from your heart. Good Job.

Not too bad. Not your best, though. I'm not really sure what to say; I just didn't feel this poem.
May I suggest trying rhyming... maybe that'll make the flow seem smoother.
Sorry.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

A lot of heart felt emotion. I liked it. 5/5

The emotions really shine through in this poem 5/5