Another great poem girl, you are so inspiring poet, I really can feel the poem as I can relate, you wrote some great feelings as a great poem, I specially like the line

(Trusting you is one thing I'll always regret)
this is how i feel about a person right now, a 100 % great poem, 5/5

All I have is my knifes and fears

[Should be Knives]

This was sad, but really uplifting in a way, too. Very nicely written, and I know you can be strong without this person!! ..Awesome job, hun! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Great job. Very straightforward and clear. Be independent. Though between the 2nd and the 3rd stanza, I was a bit confused because the storyline changed suddenly.

Very good poem and the rhyming was
smooth, I really enjoy reading it nice job.....GJ

This was a pretty good poem Nelle. Not one of your better ones, but it was still good. Very strong and straight to the point type poem. Keep writing, and keep smiling.

PS. I am so much cooler than you :P

I like how you started this poem with a question,
And ended it with a strong line.
Very nice to read at.

God Bless you always.

Its good keep it up! x