Wow sweet and sad poem.. i can feel the emtotion this was so sweet i can relate at the same time... beautiful job5/5

Another well penned poem! it had emotions it in, and came straight from the heart!

Keep it up!

Thanks for the comment on my poems it means alot to me!

Different type of writing you have here which is in my opinion,Effective.
a 5/5 for sure.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like.

God Bless!

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