Very beautiful and appreciative. loved it 100%. truly amazing. ur a great poet. 5/5

Very nice poem, happy way to read and start your day :)
well done,keep it up :)

A beautiful poem teaching us to be positive

I have no Idea why this poem sounds so much like me.

"Every morning that I'm able
to open my eyes,
I am grateful for the
blessing of meeting the sunrise."

The above lines are my favorites.

Good work..Letrice couldnt wait to read more of your poems.

God Bless!

Beautiful penned you potray here...oh my..wonder of nature...i like this stanza...beautiful done!

"Once it sets its brush into motion
the rest of nature joins in. They
all create their own tempo to the
song the birds sing"

best wishes from west, bert..~

"Every morning that I'm able
to open my eyes,
I am grateful for the
blessing of meeting the sunrise."

What a way to start the day

Love it

You get better with each poem

John
5/5

Awesome, Awesome, Awesome This poem has a great flow with beautiful meaning. Great job once again.

Arsalan D.

WOah I cant say anything to this one Grealy Beautifully and awesomely written Very nice job

Geneross

Ok i like the poem, but i dont like the rhythm youve used for it. -with the random lines beginning within oneanother. (does that even make sense?) ex-I prepare myself mentally for the
beautiful picture that I know it'll
paint. It peaks from beyond the
horizon as its canvas awaits.
the breaks dont match.. i think itd make the whole poem sound and flow better if you broke it up differently maybe as-
I prepare myself mentally,
for the beautiful picture
that I know it'll paint.
It peaks from beyond the
horizon, as its canvas awaits.

just a suggestion because if the line ends abruptly in the midst of a thouhgt or actual line, it makes it choppy nad confusing, this style worked int he other poem, but i didnt feel it here.

*another thing- i hate when people use and,.,. -and say thank you my friend.. try 'saying' instead, it sounds better.

But otherwise a great poem its like the sequal to your other poem., i loved reading them one after another. =]

x.x:Lauren

Ahh i made a mistake in my suggestion-It peaks from beyond the horizon,
as its canvas*another word here maybe?* awaits.

=] still a 5 tho. =]