Comments : Seashells

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    A lovely poem, using the sound in seashells as an analogy for memory.

    Please allow me to correct some grammar for you:

    And a memory that wont be erased
    (You could say "in my mind" but most memories are in one's mind, so it's redundant)

    Still (do you mean "yet" or "not moving"?) remembrance will echo or "remembrances echo"

    EnvelopEs