Comments : Submit to beauty

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    I used to be a dreamer, living life above the clouds
    Where the world is secluded, and silence is loud
    ^^
    Amazing lines Katie !
    The pen scratches the paper, and the ink flows gently through
    Tales which were forgotten, of dreams, of love, of you
    When the days grow older and the sun kisses the cry
    I let the wind caress me, As my body starts to cry
    ^^

    I think in the first stanza 3rd line you may have meant

    When the days grow older and the sun kisses the sky

    but I may be wrong ...or just a little crazy.....lol

    Thank-you for sharing your poetry once again Katie . Amazing talent , dear girl .