Very sad :( but you wrote it so beautifully! :) great job 5/5

So heart wrenching when you have to see someone you care about with someone else.

Beautifully penned. Especially liked this stanza:

I'd kidded myself into thinking
That maybe you felt the same
But now my hopes have dissappeared
And in their place is pain

Good job.
Peace and Happiness
Jeannie

Nice clean straight to the point poem. Great rhythm too! You may want to check your spelling again...just a minor thing. Thanks for reading my poem.

This is so fantastic!
Beautiful and sad.
Love you lots
..xx