Awww man ! Whom ever gave you a 3 on this poem is out of their freakin-mind .
There were so many unique lines in this poem, ones unlike anything I have ever seen before .
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Arriving in a fragrant world
where fantasy and reality colloid.
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Once living and breathing for your sight,
Now feasting upon your presence.
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Amazingly crafted lines .
The ending was so sad and fit perfectly with the title .

Thank-you for sharing ....

Very descriptive. I can feel your emotions. Great Writing! =)

Oh my goodness.
I logged onto this poem and looked at the long words and nearly cried..
But then I started reading and they were so perfect for the poem, they made the imagery so much better, and some of them are just, well, beautiful

"There I find your arms holding me,
Myself, gluttonously drinking you up"

Those two lines were amazing, I am so glad you put "gluttonously" in your poem, that is a GREAT word..

One nitpick..
"rapped" I think you missed out the W on this one..

But that made no difference to the write..
Well done, incredibly creative.

And thank you for the comments, they are much appreciated!

take care!
katie!
xxx