Your poem is quite sad. I'm sorry to hear that this has happened to you. How old was your brother?? I'm sorry to hear of this, but you could at least try to pray. I know its painful, I just wrote a poem about a death as well. Its called, Anthony Joesph Saviano... You should go read it...

This is so sad. However, you did an amazing job on it. I loved reading it. Also, as Keeley said, you should pray, it might be good for you. I'm sorry for what happened. bye