Comments : Bid Farewell

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Now this...was amazing!! I love how you expressed yourself. It seems like you can write about anything...and even if its the smallest thing...you make it seem so ...great...lol idk what I'm saying. But I'm pretty sure you understand right? Lol i hope so! I lvoed this!!! Take care and God bless,

    [[ Poetess ]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Girl, I must say you have really
    expressed the state of the world in these
    trying times, no doubt.
    Each stanza a great write by them selfs
    and as a whole has a lot for all of us to
    learn.
    Lets hope and pray we all can soon live
    in peace and no one will never have to
    Bid farewell

    Excellent read indeed and write on,
    Bogie

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    I agree.
    If life is Like a Rose...
    Then what about its Thorns?
    may this be an eye opener to the world we are living in.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Maiya

    Il ove the truth & honesty you put into this poem. its morbidly beautiful :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Life has many faces, but two parts

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Omg hvnt I said that I love this line!
    dumb! lol.