Nicely done my friend. Beautiful job. The healing heart at the end an indication of your nature and optimism about love. Wonderful insight.

Very Descriptive and Well Written.

Magnificent arrays of words, that makes me want to read it over and over again.
The structure very unique also.
A very good read.

Wow, this is truly wonderful. such amazing imagery, it really touches the heart, the language is very beautiful and it creates a mysterious tone which, along with the slow pace, really gets the reader thinking. excellent job!

I really really liked this poem. What a great way to discribe the heart like that of glass. Excellent!