Comments : Daddy

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Sad poem you wrotre here, which I can relate.
    Good work!
    5/5
    Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Another long poem.
    But another poem that kept me interested.
    Good work.
    Flow was good here also.
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    I can relate to this, but now with my dad, with my mom.

    i know it hurts, but you just have to be strong. if you need to talk im here for you.

    good job writing this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is all to true for many children, so many parents walk out on children's lives as if they have no care in the world, and the sad thing is some don't excellent write 5/5