I like this poem it had alot of feelings.
well good job. check out mine, even though they are lame.

OMG! thats a very sad poem!

no one should expect pain!

OMG! thats a very sad poem!

no one should expect pain!

Such a sad theme, but well written, flows well,and makes the emotion very clear to the reader
so,well done
keep it up :)

Nice poem, very nicely written

It sounds like your trying to convince someone? keep writing, it helps

What an incredible poem. Makes me wanna just... write a poem like it. Angers me that i didn't write this. I hope you don't feel this way... well, eventually, everyone does once in a while. I just want to comment on how incredible this poem is. 5/5

A very good poem, sad but very well written well done 5/5 xx

Girl dats good but its sad ur pretty hot lol for u r but yes 5/5

Very good poem. I could see someone really saying that. Another poem that I like. Keep up the good work. Another 5/5 :)