This is a wonderful well thought out poem. As I read the words you chose to describe nature I can imagine it clearly. You have painted a wonderful picture with your words. This is an
excellent masterpiece. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

Letty

It's pretty well done, rhytm and rhyme works well ,
but the first sentence of the sextet in only 9 syllables
apart from that it's nicely written :)
keep it up