LMAO and btw, i am not suicidle. This is not about me.

Wow. This is an amazinng poem. I can completely relate.

I love the ending,
'A world full of hate and I long to cry,
Long to love and long to die,
I need help, somebody please help me try,

I still feel numbness, and dont know why.' - The meaning is great, and the flow is really nice.

I'd like to read more soon :)

~Scarlett

Wow...just simply wow..dude great poem! Great flow..lil rhyme there...ncie emotions...everything was just great! i loved it!
Keep It up!

Keep Smiling
-*-TOrmented

Excellent poem.. The rhythm and flow were superb.. well done 5/5 xx

I really liked this. 5/5

Thx 4 the comment. luv this piece
andi

A transparent window and a blank reflection,
An eternal dessert of absent affection.

Loved those lines. This poem is teetering on the edge of dark poetry.

Great write.

Wow! ok it took my breath away.

"An endless stream of empty blood,
A wordless novel, a heart of mud"

it's beautiful in it's own dark way. keep it up rob ;)