Comments : Today

  • 17 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    My mother cries for being the only one
    Who actually cared for us and everyone
    {Loved this stanza!}

    This poem is very very nice.. i liked the depth and the emotion in this piece also this poem says so much to me ... i love it! only critique i would give to you is that don't use too many I's, Me's, It's, etc... Using too many of them can ruin the flow and most people downvote the poem because of that... try using differnt words which mean the same thing... also use commas and fullstops.
    but still the poem as it is great and i can say you are very talented.. my poems aren't as great as yours but anyway Great Poem.. Loved the meaning behind it! and Keep it Up!

    Keep Smiling
    ~D*K~