This is so awesome. It's amazing how great a picture you painted with so little words. It's kind of chilling and very... I don't know. It rocks.

Write more soon! ;)

{{If you like, check out one of my poems and tell me what you think}}

~Scarlett

This is very good. great idea. keep up the good work. :-]

I like this one... :) it's really good written and good language usage...

5/5

Woah... thats really dark.
Well done on this one hun, it seems to be set apart from your other poems, but in a good way.
It's a good dark poem
5/5
*Gem*