This is another really good poem. It's dark and sad, but very catching, if that makes any sense.

~Scarlett

It's really good...
and i know what u're talking about, i know what razorcutz feel like but just like you said: Life will be better...

5/5

A very dreamy ending, almost like drifting off to sleep which is kind of true in a way.

"Slicing up her pretty skin"

Now THAT was a good opening. It almost contradicts itself.
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*