Wonderful, Lovely write with a twist of delicate sadness at the end.
And what great with this poem is that many out there can Relate to it,and for sure I'm one of those.

God Bless!

Whoa! what i switch! I totally didn't see that coming. ha, if nothing else, that alone made it a poem to stand out from the thousands of love poems on this site. there were, however, other good things ; ) I liked the phrase "seen through Love's red dye," in particular.

thanks for your comment on my poem, as well - i really appreciate it

Great write, best poem i have read in awhile! I like how it has the twist of sadness at the end!! I also like the phrases you use like "seen through Love's red dye," her lips were wet with words left not to say." You did an amazing job!!!! Flow and rhyme were perfect!!! Loved it!!! 5/5!

Hey anh
you're getting better.

=]

Make the syllable count more uniform or rhythmic to get a better flow

Rawr