Its a good thing that let your emotions out.
And it is hard to face sometimes the reality.

Keep on writing on what u feel and like
5/5

This is a nice poem. I've read one like it before, and the style is really good.

BTW, I love your pen name, lol.

~Scarlett Ivy

Woah!! This is a great poem!! I like the way its written. Well done!!

Awwww!!!! This is one of the most sadest beautiful poems that I have ever read. You put so much deep emotion into that I was able to feel it. I am in aww. I give you five thumbs up for this magnificent piece. Please keep up the excellent work.

Hugs
Letty

P.S. Thank you for the wonderful comments they me a lot to me.

Great topic, excellent lesson. You can improve by using more imagery and using less "fill words" You can also work on the flow. Keep it up^-^

Wow very ver well written, and ya this is what happens when people drink and drive, very true!

=( This made me think about my dad and how he used to drink and drive. He didn't end up hurting anyone, but it's still a risky thing to do.

I liked this poem a lot. The flow was a bit off in places, but it all worked out. I also didn't know why you put it in the micellaneous poems. I thought it could possibly go in the sad or the dark poems. But still well written. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I would put this poem under Sad Poem, because really, this poem was very sad. A very tragic story, and I've lost a friend to a car crash, but he was a driver. Very sad story, I hope it didn't happen to someone close to you.

WOW!!! That last stanza says it all, doesn't it. Was thinking at the beginning that she was the victim of a drunk driver...

Well done.

Cute

^How's it cute :/
Lmao.

I liked this poem; It was long but kept me interested.
The flow could use help in places but other than its flawless.
Well done.

Wow another great poem. is this based on something that really happened?

i wrote a poem about my friend who died from a drunk driver too.

well this poem is sad but its really good. you put a lot of emotion in it. keep it up 5/5

Wow...
That was just... wow

You did a great job on this poem.
5/5
*Gem*

OMG.. im speechless. This is so sad. I really liked the way things flowed together and the emotion behind the words. 5/5
~Kyra~

Wow that was an awsome poem..
im really speachless..
that is way to good.

Your poem was beautiful hey why dont you rate mine ( im new)

Wow...i completely agree with the whole drinking and driving thing...i wrote a poem about it as well called The Night That I Died. i loved your poem...5/5.

Hey, this is soooooo sad, i swear I'm wiping away a tear, I'm really hoping this is really somthing that happened. Well done, Great poem, 5/5
Love ~She Died Screaming

Another great poem and a fantastic message your poems really wake me up keep on going the way you are.