by Misstress
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Lovely. |
by Nee
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OMG!!!!!!! I REALLY need these words in my life!!!!! |
by dora
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HEy darl a very heartelt poem. great use of words in this. always love readin ur work. very well written and structured. keep em coming xx |
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When something like this comes right from the bottom of heart, it really doesnt matter if it rhymes or not...and what you wrote here is felt by my soul...great write |
by shadowlight
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This peice is fantastic, truely the content is well presented and everything so powerfully conveyed. |
by Bridgette
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I love this poem. It was very beautifully written and it is very deep. Great job on this. I can definitely relate to this. Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Natalie
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Oh my. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this piece. You chose amazing wording to give the poem that extra effect. The emotions were very heartfelt and warming and flowed beautiful together. Very nicely done! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Yu Lee
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If Love is like Roses,then what about its thorns..I really like that line. It has a nice ring to it and its very creative. |
by UnToLd TrUtH
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Wow this is great. 5/5 |
by Kristina
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Aww wow i really like tihs poem a lot. very deep and beautiful. you did a wonderful job on it. very well written poem. keep it up! 5/5 |
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I find this poem very soothing for the soul. Wonderful job hun 5/5 |
by Letty
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Awwww!!!!!!!!!! This was so beautiful! you really have a way with words. I felt all the deep and strong love and desire that you put into this poem. It really is a magnificent work of art. The flow was wondrful and the words had me feeling like I was in a whirlwind. This poem captured me from the beginning to the end and then it had me wanting so much more. you have done it again my friend, you are just simply amazing. 5/5 Keep writing these beautiful, talented pieces of romance. |
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Lovely poemmmmmmmmmmm |