This is an awesome poem. It's so hateful, you just feel guilty reading it, as if you are the one the narratator is talking to.

I love the line, 'Thank you for the death you have granted me,
The pain you've banished here,
Thank you for killing me, my one true love,
I hope you live in fear.' It's so spiteful and you can just tell how upset the narrarator is.

Rght more soon. This was really good ;)

~Scarlett

That's freaking deep dude. I like the beginning how you started it off. Then you kept it going all the way to the end 5/5
-VIno

Wow this poem is great. I love the very ending the best though. 5/5.

This speaks to me greatly...I love it...It explains how I want to feel toward my ex how I want him to know I feel... I loved it....Dana